From e412913bfa7a38b44603d8dc0760f26c5cb499b6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mark Pilgrim <mark@diveintomark.org>
Date: Thu, 16 Apr 2009 00:51:05 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] slightly better intro for advanced-iterators chapter. still
 not happy with it

---
 advanced-iterators.html | 7 +++----
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/advanced-iterators.html b/advanced-iterators.html
index 8a13bc9..0bdf81d 100644
--- a/advanced-iterators.html
+++ b/advanced-iterators.html
@@ -16,9 +16,7 @@ body{counter-reset:h1 6}
 </blockquote>
 <p id=toc>&nbsp;
 <h2 id=divingin>Diving In</h2>
-<p class=f>G<code>OYA + INGRES + RENOIR + SARGENT = ARTISTS</code>. Or, to put it another way, <code>8643 + 598712 + 719657 + 2378190 = 3705202</code>.
-
-<p>It might make more sense if I line it up for you.
+<p class=f>G<code>OYA + INGRES + RENOIR + SARGENT = ARTISTS</code>. Or, to put it another way, <code>8643 + 598712 + 719657 + 2378190 = 3705202</code>. Am I speaking in tongues? No, it's just a puzzle. Here, let me line it up for you.
 
 <pre><code>GOYA + INGRES + RENOIR + SARGENT = ARTISTS
 8643 + 598712 + 719657 + 2378190 = 3705202
@@ -355,7 +353,8 @@ for guess in itertools.permutations(digits, len(characters)):
 
 <h2 id=string-translate>A New Kind Of String Manipulation</h2>
 
-<p>Strings have a powerful
+<p>FIXME
+
 <pre class=screen>
 <samp class=p>>>> </samp><kbd>characters = tuple(ord(c) for c in 'SMEDONRY')</kbd>
 <samp class=p>>>> </samp><kbd>characters</kbd>