diff --git a/docs/index.rst b/docs/index.rst
index 2a9416ce..ac67e3ee 100644
--- a/docs/index.rst
+++ b/docs/index.rst
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
    You can adapt this file completely to your liking, but it should at least
    contain the root `toctree` directive.
 
-Pipenv: Sacred Marriage of Pipfile, Pip, & Virtualenv
-=====================================================
+Pipenv: Python Development Workflow for Humans
+==============================================
 
 .. image:: https://img.shields.io/pypi/v/pipenv.svg
     :target: https://pypi.python.org/pypi/pipenv
@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ Pipenv: Sacred Marriage of Pipfile, Pip, & Virtualenv
 
 **Pipenv** — the officially recommended Python packaging tool from `Python.org <https://packaging.python.org/new-tutorials/installing-and-using-packages/>`_, free (as in freedom).
 
-Pipenv is a project that aims to bring the best of all packaging worlds (bundler, composer, npm, cargo, yarn, etc.) to the Python world. It harnesses `Pipfile <https://github.com/pypa/pipfile>`_, `pip <https://github.com/pypa/pip>`_, and `virtualenv <https://github.com/pypa/virtualenv>`_ into one single toolchain. It features very pretty terminal colors. *Windows is a first–class citizen, in our world.*
+Pipenv is a tool that aims to bring the best of all packaging worlds (bundler, composer, npm, cargo, yarn, etc.) to the Python world. *Windows is a first–class citizen, in our world.*
 
-It automatically creates and manages a virtualenv for your projects, as well as adds/removes packages from your ``Pipfile`` as you install/uninstall packages. The ``lock`` command generates a lockfile (``Pipfile.lock``).
+It automatically creates and manages a virtualenv for your projects, as well as adds/removes packages from your ``Pipfile`` as you install/uninstall packages. It also generates the ever–important ``Pipfile.lock``, which is used to produce deterministic builds.
 
 
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